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"Dude, no fair! You pushed me off of the track!"
"There is no rules that says I can't."
"2 out of 3."
"No way man. You lost so you have to do you part of our deal."
"I don't want to…" He sunk in his seat.
"We both swore whoever lost would handle their part of the deal. So you have to."
"What if-what if she hits me?"
Cyborg shrugged, "Just give it a try."
"Fine." Beastboy stood up from the couch and walk through the door down the hallway where the team members rooms were. He stopped in front of Raven's door. He hesitated with going to knock. As he raised his hand to knock the door slid open just a crack, so you could see one of the Empath's violet eyes.
"What?" She said in her monotone voice.
"Um....I was wondering…" Beastboy rubbed the back of his neck, trying to find the right words.
"Quit babbling. If you don't have anything to say, leave." Raven went to close her door but Beastboy stopped it with his foot.
"Raven, would you go on a date with me?" Raven's eyes widened as she slammed her door shut. Her face was burning red.
"Ooh he finally asked. You should say yes."  Love said
"Shut up, Love." Raven said.
"Come on, I think it will be fun!." Happy was jumping around excited.
"He probably doesn't even mean it." Timid said.
"Would you all shut up!"
"Uhm....Raven are you okay?" She heard Beastboy ask from outside her door.
"Yeah, I'm fine." She opened the door, "Just come in and sit down. I'll be right back." Raven failed to tell him of the other Raven's, or Emoticlones if you must, in her room. He sat down on the edge of her bed and waited for her to come back.
"Hi, Beastboy." He jumped and turned around seeing Raven wearing a purple cloak.
"Raven? How did you-where did you-you just left the room."
"No, I didn't. I've been here the whole time." Love started to trace her finger up and down Beastboy's chest.
"What are you doing?" His green face had turned red.
"I don't know."
"Love, Raven told us not to mess with him. Remember?" A yellow Raven came from the corner of the room. Beastboy freaked out and fell off the bed.
"But he's cute."
"I don't care."
"Well, you should care. When Raven finds out that you were messing with Beastboy we-"
"Are all in trouble!" Raven yelled as she closed the door to her room. Beastboy, realising this was the real Raven, hid behind her.
"This was a privilege to let you guys out since it would be easier for me to meditate. Now, you're all going back."
"I told you to watch it."
"Shut up, Wisdom." Rude snapped.
Raven grabbed her mirror, "Azarath Metrion Zinthos." Her eyes and the chakra on her forehead glowed as all the Emoticlones were sucked back into the mirror.
"Why did you freak out like that, Beastboy? You've seen them all before."
"They kinda took me by surprise."
"Oh."
"So, why did you slam the door in my face?"
"You took me by surprise is all."
"Would you though?" Beastboy took one of Raven's hands in his. Raven hid her face in her cloak well so Beastboy couldn't see how red it was.
She took her hand back, "I don't know..."
"I want you to, Raven."
"Why? Why me? I'm not your type. I'm not like Terra."
"You're right." Raven felt her spirit sink when he said that.
"You're not like Terra. You're so much more. You might have your moments when you scare the living hell out of me, but then you can be kind and gentle. I've seen that side of you, Raven."
"You don't think, I'm creepy?"
"No, you're way creepy, but that's what I like about you."
"Okay."
"Okay, what?"
"I'll go on a date with you." Beastboy stood up fast and hugged her. It caught Raven by surprise that her black energy caused a light bulb in her room to shatter.
"Sorry." She looked away blushing
"No, it's fine." He walked to the door. "I'll see you later tonight."
"Uhm...okay."
"Bye Raven." With that Beastboy shut her door, leaving the Empath frozen where she stood.
This is my new Teen Titans Fanfic. Let me know if y'all like it. All of this kinda just came to me. In case you don't know here are a list of Raven's emotions:
Pink=Happiness/Happy
Gray=Timid/Shy
Green=Bravery
Red=Rage
Orange=Rude
Yellow=Wisdom
Purple=Love
Brown=Slob
Maroon=Lust
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Geekygamer86 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
in my opinion your fan fic has a good story but it lacks structure, most of the time i did not know who was talking, purple is not love, the colour is violet and it stands for passion, also since when does raven have the emotion, lust, also if she does have lust, you could not have had picked a less attractive colour for lust, but i see why you were forsed to use that colour as all colours that suit lust are already taken(and since when is lust an emotion) also because i have nothing better to do I am going to improve the structure of your fan fic and if you want ill send you the finished product
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Rainier-The-Wolf Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
In my opinion, you have no right to comment since you lack sentence structure, proper grammar usage, and the ability to spell. Also, because I have nothing better to do, I am going to improve your comment, and - if you want - I'll send you the finished product.
Please, if you plan to comment, make it truly worthwhile.
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Geekygamer86 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
i wuold vry much like thet feed back is always a good thing to receive
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RRandBBforever Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
what is the pic you are using . I don't know who that is
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BBRAE1994 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student Artist
My icon? If that is what you are talking about, that is Andy from Black Veil Brides.
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raven-lover123 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this is one of the better bbxrae fanfictions :icongrin--plz: 
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BBRAE1994 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Student Artist
Thank you so much
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raven-lover123 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome :icongrin--plz:
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dj19taz Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
Awww
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thunderboltdrawer15 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
he he he he he he he he he!
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